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Unto Our Fallen Muse

THROUGH THE USE OF THIS WEB-LOG, I HOPE TO ENCOURAGE THE DEVELOPMENT OF STYLE, EXPRESSION AND PERSPECTIVE THROUGH THE EXAMINATION AND DISCUSSION OF CREATIVE WRITING. ALL VISITORS, COMMENTS & CONTRIBUTIONS ARE MOST CERTAINLY WELCOME WITHIN THIS SPACE; SO PLEASE, WRITERS OF THE WORLD REJOICE, AND MAKE YOURSELVES AT HOME, THAT WE MAY SUMMARILY ENJOY THAT WHICH WILL INEVITABLY ENSUE.

Tuesday, October 03, 2006

THE BUS RIDE HOME:

Reflecting On One Gray, September Day:

Welcome to the Great White North, both strong and free,
Tell me Ms. DiFranco, do you still want to move here
To escape from the powers that be?
'Cause down on de Maisonneuve the sounds of shots rang out,
We’re just of free here to buy weapons to scream to shout.

Hey, Coupeland, won't you come take a look,
Will these kids live and die living like those in your book?
Hey, Michael, your Canada theory doesn’t stand,
Because there’s no less fear in our native land.

There’s no explanation that quite explains the root,
Of why some folks transform pain to terror and then begin to shoot.

Guns flood the streets of Toronto, girls die on boxing day;
Young men terrorize students, with weapons both legal and paid,
And Bill’s in Japan, feeling this pain all alone,
While I ride past the school, everyday on my way home.

They used to ask, where you when Kennedy was shot,
Or when man landed on the moon?
Then, where were you on 9/11 when the war began again so soon?
And for the next day, for the next week, it’s all that’s on our minds,
Where were you when Dawson became a word synonymous with Columbine?

We search for some explanation but still we’re at a loss,
And the best we can do now is to ask,
How many lives will this one cost?

2 Comments:

Thus spake Blogger Libra:

This touch of realism seems to be quite a contrast from other recent posts - on the other hand it is no less violent.

Tuesday, October 03, 2006  
Thus spake Anonymous Anonymous:

I've revised the first line of the poem because I realized "the home of the brave and the land of the free" was a line from the Star-Spangled Banner -- and since I was intending to refer to Canada I thought it best to change it. (Although I still like the sounds of the original line better)

Tuesday, October 31, 2006  

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